Describing people
Firstly, my friend isn't shy at all, she's very self-confident. She gets on with people very simply. Sometimes she tends to be slightly sensitive but usually she is pretty relaxed. She isn't serious but she's fairly thoughtful. She tends to be slightly dreamy, especially during the lessons but usually she's pretty enthusiastic about what she's doing. Sometimes she bites her nails and lip when she's thinking. The thing that really annoys me is that she is constantly checking her mobile. This quirk irritates me a lot because while checking her phone she doesn't listen to me. As for her abilities, she's incredibly good at drawing and painting. She sings unbelievably well, her voice is fantastic, however she doesn't play any musical instruments.
Dasha, look up the difference between 'first', 'firstly', and 'at first' here: http://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/first-firstly-or-at-first.
ОтветитьУдалитьAlso have a look at the last sentence of your essay - there is a spelling mistake, a grammar mistake and a punctuation mistake.