среда, 12 марта 2014 г.

Describing the photo

Describing the photo, p.52

I took the photo last summer when I had holidays in Corsica. I was walking along the beach when I sighted three old men playing a really strange game. They were so excited and interested in the game that I decided to take a photo of the process. Later I found out that this game is one of the most favourite activities of Corsican pensioners. It's called Petanque. The goal of the game is to throw hollow metal balls as close as possible to a small wooden ball, while standing inside a starting circle with both feet on the ground. Of course, I tried to play this game. Actually, it's not easy to win!
I decided to show the difference between old people's activity all over the world. That's why you can see this photo in the magazine.

1 комментарий:

  1. Dear Daria, mind this:
    1) there should be an article in sentence 2.
    2) do you really need possessive 's in 'favourite activities of Corsican's pensioners'?
    3) the last paragraph isn't logical